A girl working at summer camp narrates her journey as she comes to realize that many of the adults she works for are just bigger versions of the children she works with.
This sounds really controversial and like she needs to discover how the world works around her. I am not really sure what is going to happen in the story, but I guess that is why we have to read it! I definitely want to read it because I like the parallel between the people she is involved with.
I really like the originality in the idea of your script. I think you will do a great job at portraying emotions. There is a lot of mystery in what is going to occur, and where the connections are. I'm not quite sure where the conflict is, but it could be more like a moral and deeper conflict.
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ReplyDeleteThis sounds really controversial and like she needs to discover how the world works around her. I am not really sure what is going to happen in the story, but I guess that is why we have to read it! I definitely want to read it because I like the parallel between the people she is involved with.
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ReplyDeleteI really like the originality in the idea of your script. I think you will do a great job at portraying emotions. There is a lot of mystery in what is going to occur, and where the connections are. I'm not quite sure where the conflict is, but it could be more like a moral and deeper conflict.
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ReplyDeletethis sounds like it would be really relateable! sounds good!
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